Thursday, August 20, 2009

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whenever things is life are not going as planned...one always has two ways to go forward...either keep trynig or say WTF and quit!!
this is what 24 abhukh shrivastava was faced with....he was a calm guy who never thought doing what he wanted to do would land him in what he never wanted to do....LOVE!!!...

thats what he did...he loved a woman so badly that she had become his sole aim of life..right from the first day he saw her he knew she would be the one who would make him cpomplete...be his better half...but as luck would have it...things were definetly not destined to beasy...

he was a guy of t...a guy wid his mba degree from one of the Iims earning abt arnd 80 grand a month..he had practicall anything that he had wanted...and she was something that he wasnted to achieve...te only thing he had not yet conquered....

she was Riya..Riya saxena...a girl who had just joined his office as his deputy...and from the first had been close to him....sitting in the same cabin didnt make thins easy for abhyuk...he was elder to her b abt 4 yrs...but he tried hard to make her feel comfortable...make her interact with him at an inter peronal level...
but then she had taken him as her mentor.. a man whom she looked upto...a guy who wil guide her and be her beacon as she would pass through the murky corporate world...

das had passed...days became weeks...it was high time abhyuk thought something must be done....he stalled...wondering whether he sould do what he was bout to...he had never done this before...he had alwas been an introvert..and he didnt want to hurt riya at any cost....he asked her out for dinner...riya's jaw dropped....and her it opened ...trying to say a few words...only to close again...she didnt know how to react...abhyuk realized he might have messed up...just as he was about to to apologize and set matters to ease...she said OK.....she was read for the dinner....abhyuk was stunned....he couldn believe what he just heard....it was decided for 8 in the night....

he was dressed like a gentleman...a man an gurl would would fall for...she was looking like a princess in her black gown that was tantalizingly sensuous for any man's eyes....

the dinner wasnt the main issue here at the hotel..which happpened to be among the finest ones in the town...their eyes finall met...it seemed straight right for him to tell her right there that she was the one for him...how much he loved her.....even her eyes were looking at him...she was obviously nervous....she smiled at thin and started looking at him with a reazization that he mat more than just a boss or a mentor....a man who would keep her happy for the rest of his life...it was comforting for both of them...

on the dance floor...it was teh jazz night...arms in arms...looking at each other...they danced...never knowing what was happening around them now...it was as if time had stood still...and only one thing mattered..them...love was in the air...maybe she had reazilzed it to...boith brought thier face forward...it was as if the kiss had been a prewritten destiny then...but it didnt...she laid her down on his chest....something that meant more then to him than a kiss...and they were still dancin....holding each other tightly n one othe's arms...

at the end when it was time to drop her off...he decided to stop the car about a kilometre from her house....and decided to walk her home...stealing a few extra moments with her in this bargain...

walking had never been such a pleasure for both of them...but it still semed differnt..silence defined the mood....but suddenly..."I MIGHT BE GETTING ENGAGED THIS WEEK..."....riya didnt have to say that...but then abhyuk had to know...

he just stopped....he couldn take it....what did she just!!? "what....are u serious!?"...ya i am...my parents are coming tommorow...and i would be going back to delhi tommorow for a week's time..we are going to ma dad's old friends place...its his son ....i had apllied for a weeks leave...remember!?...

she had...and it was for this reason abhyuk had asked her out today....his inner voice had told him if not today...thn never....but guess it had slso for got to tell him that there was also a shock in store for him....
"oh good...congrats...whose the lucky guy..."...his voice disguised his distress..."i dont kno actually...but except fot the fact that he shares our name"...

the world had fallen apart..,how more unlucky could he be....his name...bu not him...was that a solace he was supposed to live wifth the rest of his life....

his phone rung then...'michalel jackson's all i wanna say is that they dont relly cared about us' was blared loudyl...."hey abhyuk....its dad here...i want you to be here in delhi in a couple of days time/...no ifs or buts..."..."but dad...i got a lot of work here('delhi..no not now...especially when she mite be getting engaged there with my namesake')...".."you will be here...thats all"...and he hung up...his dad had never been so rude to him...but then they never had been on good terms for sme time now...

her house had come...he wanted to kiss her...just say it out...nut then wthat would just make him a loser....just then unexpectedly.....she landed a peck on his cheek...it was his lips...but then it deflected towards his cheek...he was sure aboout...he smiled...thats the least he could do now...

he had had his souvenier ....or maybe the final nail in the coffin of his love life....


THREE DAYS LATER:

abhyuk had finally reached delhi...and was sipping coffee...thinking about here...where she would be...what se would be doing...she was in the same city...he wanted to speak to her...his hand reached for the phone....but he just couldn....

that evening...his dad's lan had been revealed to him...
his dad's friend's family was visiting him...and he expected his son to interact with his friend's daughter....

he texted her'maybe even i am getting engaged'....and then he finally gathered up the courage. to call her upjas he was abt to call her...he recieved a beep beep..a text' i am not asking you who the klucky gurl is...but just wish i was that lucky gurl'....

he couldn believe it....
he called her....maybe there was still a chance....maybe they could convince both their parents....he waitd for her to pick up...but then he was hearing a ringtone somewhere nearby...he could have sweared rthat he had heard it somehere else...it was the same as ria's...it was coming from his hall..and riya still wasnt picking up..

there in the hall..stould RAJ SAXENA's family....he,his wife JYOTHI..........................................................................and his daughter RIYA...

he could he beleve what he saw...riya was there...she was stunned....shocked..,..surprised...but happy....there parents wanted them to marry each other!!?...how small the world can be...

how comehe never knew his dads friend raj saxena....was riya's dad...!?

but then it was not the time for these questions now....


they both were left togerther in a rooom to interact with each other...get to know each other well(thats an old indian tradition)...


and then the were alone...

just one thing happened.....they kissed...as passionatre as they could be....it was the eruption of enotions.....as if there was noo tommorow...

it went on and on and on...the were finally one now...


and there parents were happily discussing engagement and marriage plans now over cup of tea...while there children were still engrossed in telling each other how much they loved each other...
Adsesnse

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